0117点评《Drawing Baltimore with a bicycle》

疑难句

1. Wallace’s phone records his ride as he pedals the same course he has previously hand drawn on a map, the result being a dark line of his route saved and superimposed on a Google Map.
原译文：就像他以前将同样的历程手绘在一副地图上那样，华莱士的手机记录了他的骑行历程，使他的骑行轨迹形成一条黑色线条保存并叠加在谷歌地图上。
审校后：他事先在地图上画出路线，再用手机记录下骑行过程，最终使骑行轨迹形成一条黑色线条，保存并叠加在谷歌地图上。

2. ... which left it completely disconnected from the torso.
原译文：…… 这与他未完成的作品毫无关系。
审校后：…… 结果这部分完全与躯干分离了。

3. It’s just this underground pocket of people that are aware.
原译文：他们只关心掉在地上的钱包。
审校后：只有玩过《掌上地下城》游戏的人才明白。

翻译书例句

1. It is useless your trying to evade the question.
你不用顾左右而言他。

2. A mix of Jacks and Jills makes a tough job a breeze.
男女搭配，干活不累。

3. Those who have the interest of their country at heart are praise worthy.
忧国之士值得颂扬。

4. That virtue which requires to be ever guarded is scarcely worth the sentinel.
需要常常保护的美德是不值得看守的。

5. He is as kind as his sister is honest.
他妹妹诚实，他善良。

灵魂高汤

1. “Learn how to best use the talent you have.”
2. “Get the nicest equipment available. It doesn’t have to cost a lot.”
3. “Just hang on, man.”
-- Comedian Marc Maron